Shiro the Black Saint (True Identity Revealed *Update*) and Grandark Zero The Culprit

oh that means..?! YEAH!! Link Start! xD

um, i did approve you lol, not that we do the whole approving bit on here, you make a character and just start posting

when will Zero approve my character? can't wait.. -_-

everything that i saw was fine, though i think you should consider renaming your dual blade skill kinda like i did. but its not that big of a deal imho ^ ^ unless Zero says something to you your fine

well i edited the skills but the dual wield i dont think its illegal. i wont replace it. not until the admin tell me to.

Hey sorry to be a downer ^^ but the seven swords skill seems like a magic and may be a bit OP, and the dual wielding is a unique skill one that only Kirito has, because he was the hero of the game. You mioght want torethink your character...

Protagonist

Real Life Information:
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Name: Yatogami Hiro
Age: 18
Birthday: July 22
Birthplace: Incheon, S.Korea
Home Town: Tokyo, Japan
Occupation: Student
Back story of your character: Shiro was a rich kid, but his parents doesn't give him that attention so he focused on martial arts like taekwondo, and kendo. Because of his family's influence, Shiro was picked to be one of the many Beta Testers of SAO..

SAO Information: (True Identity Update)

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Character Name: Shiro
Level: 97 (I gained a lot of exp during my roleplaying)
HP: 20500
Type of player: Beater
Weapon Of Choice: One Handed slightly heavy swords. Dual Swords for counter attacks and combos. katana for swift slashes.
Sword: Yamato

Armor: black trench coat

Custom Skills: (True Identity Update)

Ignition Break- Shiro uses his two swords to break the ground and release a huge round shockwave. (aerial or ground) AOE 300m

Shunpo- Shiro uses his incredible speed to move in an instant frome one enemy to another and swiftly giving a killing blow.. giving him bonus moving speed and attack speed. MULTIPLE ENEMY SKILL

Liberation Break- Shiro gains a buff that converts all his normal attacks into quick, rapid thrusts and slashes with decent range and great damage and finishes it with stabbing the enemy.




Antagonist:


[JAILED]
Real Life information: Gin Totsuya

SAO INFORMATION:

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Name: Grandark Zero
Level: 95
HP: 23000
Type of Player: PKer
Weapon: Greatsword Grandark
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Armor: refer to the img

Skills:

Gran X- Grandark leaps up and slashes diagonally before bringing down a powerful burst.

Abyss- special skill that transforms Grandark into his 2nd form and covering himself with armor plates that are fired at enemies.

Bleeding Gash- leaps high into the air to throw down the Grandark on the floor. Zero then slams downward, releasing Grandark's chains to unleash deadly spikes in a specified area.